tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35727032.post116553496703655855..comments2022-03-31T11:22:58.350-07:00Comments on Crime Log: outline for storyChris Newfieldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01078395415386100872noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35727032.post-1165709887981759382006-12-09T16:18:00.000-08:002006-12-09T16:18:00.000-08:00Hi Eric, I think this will work. some of the clues...Hi Eric, I think this will work. some of the clues you mention could be discovered simply by identifying the body (that she was a lawyer) so you may want to use the observation and questioning for less obvious things and for discrepencies. Killing your ex-wife's divorce lawyer could be hard to swallow unless the lawyer did something kind of terrible in the process of winning. Otherwise why would the mailman flip out like that? Why was the house his livelihood? Did he get less than 50% etc? I think these details will turn out to be important to overall plausibility (which your sample definitely had).Chris Newfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01078395415386100872noreply@blogger.com